Another rookie fruit pruner...with rookie mistakes

If your goal is early fruit you can try bending down some branches or even girdling - more info here: Advanced tree training techniques: pruning, bending, notching, pinching, etc. Aggressive pruning also seems to discourage fruit set, for apples and pears I think its much better to try and train them into the shape you want and summer prune, but it takes more time and effort than people are willing to commit.